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 * __This I believe:__**

I wrote one of these glogs as a chareter from a book __**Hatchet**__. The other one I wrote as my self, I wrote my story and everything else about me. I don't think I did horrible on the story book golg, but this was not my best. I think i could have improved the story by seeing his feelings more and knowing what he meant a little but more. I also think I could have improved this essay by making it more personal, I talked about how he had to survie but not what he felt. The second one I liked a little better because it was a little but more personal and deep. I also talked not only about my story but others. I think I could have improved this a little more by telling a little less about me and more stories about other people. I think that my essay about me was better than the one about Brian in hatchet, I liked mine because I understood everything and what to wright. I think my writing has improved in this three weeks of this time .
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